I am a Year 8 student at Saint Pius X School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Te Wairua Pakiki Learning Space and my teachers are Mr Gaffney, Ms Nees-Kairua and Mrs Tui.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is super interesting and I really like how you have presented it. I think that it is clear and understandable. I also like that you have added in some intersting facts and an image.
One thing I think would be good to improve on would be to make sure your using free or you own images. Another thing is maybe give us more info so you don't leave your reader hanging. Keep up the good work. -Maddie
Hi! This is Kyah At Grey main School a Year 7. This is so cool! Whats the most interesting fact you learnt? Maybe next time you could add more facts and a background to make it stand out!! Other than that its amazing! Keep up the good work! -Kyah
I like how you did'nt just say facts like instead of saying zebra fish have 3 main layers inside their eggs you named the layers by adding those 3 layers are called yolk, chorion and single.
Next time you might wanna add more facts about zebrafish.
Hey there, Christopher, I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made a google drawing about zebrafish.
Did you think about doing a slide about zebrafish.
Next time, you could put more facts about zebrafish on your blog post.
What is your favorite thing about zebrafish?
^-^ Kind Regards Jorja ^-^
Hi there Christopher, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of your presentation the picture looks really cool with the writing.
Before today I didn't even know zebrafish existed. Since they are 5mm they must be very very small.
Next time you could say what you like about zebrafish or what you enjoyed most when you were learning about them.
What's your favourite fish?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis is super interesting and I really like how you have presented it. I think that it is clear and understandable. I also like that you have added in some intersting facts and an image.
One thing I think would be good to improve on would be to make sure your using free or you own images. Another thing is maybe give us more info so you don't leave your reader hanging.
Keep up the good work.
-Maddie
Hi! This is Kyah At Grey main School a Year 7.
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool! Whats the most interesting fact you learnt?
Maybe next time you could add more facts and a background to make it stand out!!
Other than that its amazing!
Keep up the good work!
-Kyah
Hi. I'm Liam from Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you did'nt just say facts like instead of saying zebra fish have 3 main layers inside their eggs you named the layers by adding those 3 layers are called yolk, chorion and single.
Next time you might wanna add more facts about zebrafish.
What do you think about zebrafish.
From Liam.