I am a Year 8 student at Saint Pius X School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Te Wairua Pakiki Learning Space and my teachers are Mr Gaffney, Ms Nees-Kairua and Mrs Tui.
I really liked your dlo. It looks super cool. I like your arrangement of the text in your dlo. They are evenly spaced etc...
I also went to the NYLD 2020 with the rest of our year 8 students. Yes, it was super inspiring and interesting. And my speaker was William Pike as well. He was very inspiring and I like the way he didn't give when things got hard for him.
Maybe for improvement you could add more text in the beginning and in the end. Try and make a connection with the reader. Anyways read my blog here.
hi my name is lucas form yaldhurst model school your blog is really good and you explained a lot about nyld I like your dlo I is so cool I went to nyld who was you favorite poison there ? bye
Hey Christopher!
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
I really liked your dlo. It looks super cool. I like your arrangement of the text in your dlo. They are evenly spaced etc...
I also went to the NYLD 2020 with the rest of our year 8 students. Yes, it was super inspiring and interesting. And my speaker was William Pike as well. He was very inspiring and I like the way he didn't give when things got hard for him.
Maybe for improvement you could add more text in the beginning and in the end. Try and make a connection with the reader. Anyways read my blog here.
Kind regards,
Albin.
hi my name is lucas form yaldhurst model school
ReplyDeleteyour blog is really good and you explained a lot about nyld
I like your dlo I is so cool I went to nyld
who was you favorite poison there ?
bye